I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 2 and my teacher is Ellen. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.helpful when you leave me a comment.
BROOKLYN you did a good thing on your warm up but there is something you did wrong you did something kind full but not help full and not a good story i like your story any was
Kia ora Brooklyn, This is Sione from Rm2, I really like your score and its so amazing, You should do some more it think, Congrats getting 100% Brooklyn Thank you for sharing your work.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughul - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
good work
ReplyDeleteBROOKLYN you did a good thing on your warm up but there is something you did wrong you did something kind full but not help full and not a good story i like your story any was
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ReplyDeletehi my name is Patrick i like how you tried your best it seemed like you were trying bye
ReplyDeleteKia ora Brooklyn,
ReplyDeleteThis is Sione from Rm2,
I really like your score and its so amazing,
You should do some more it think,
Congrats getting 100% Brooklyn
Thank you for sharing your work.